Andalucia - good story, Mark. I may have found a typo..."What a fool, he thought, trying to track down a woman I don’t even know. She is not her". Is "her" supposed to be "here"?
No. He was referring to his deceased wife. But the reader doesn't know that yet. And I didn't want to spoil the revelation that his wife had died. I probably should have used a name instead of "her."
The story of Daniel and Andalucia made my eyes teary.
Thank you, Bill. 🙂
Andalucia - good story, Mark. I may have found a typo..."What a fool, he thought, trying to track down a woman I don’t even know. She is not her". Is "her" supposed to be "here"?
No. He was referring to his deceased wife. But the reader doesn't know that yet. And I didn't want to spoil the revelation that his wife had died. I probably should have used a name instead of "her."
It does look like it should be "here", though. 🙂
Got it, Mark - that makes sense. Thanks!
Aww I love your simple love stories with fun twists yet still sweet endings!!
Thank you, Emily. Sweet as a churro. 😉
Congrats on a fine story. And you resisted any reference to the strangest movie ever, Un Chien Andalou.
Thanks, John. I wasn't hard to not reference the movie since I've never seen it. 🤓
Aw! “Andalucia” (which my autocorrect tried to make “Andalusia”) was just the thing for a Monday morning. Thanks, Mark!
Gracias, Jack. I am glad it hit the spot. Enjoy your churros!