Awww, a perfect ending. I loved the idea of a story within a story. I am a sucker for happily-ever-after. ( Not to the Hallmark degree ( euw!) , but I do love a solid, anticipated kiss.) Beautiful, Mark!
Yes, and we ALL have time to read a page. Five pages at once is harder to commit to. I hate to say it, but the long stories end up on the back burner for a while.
I think that is the way of things for many people. With this format, you don't have to wait long for the next part. Or you can wait until the end and "binge-read" it.
How sweet
Thank you, Lana! 🤓
Awww, a perfect ending. I loved the idea of a story within a story. I am a sucker for happily-ever-after. ( Not to the Hallmark degree ( euw!) , but I do love a solid, anticipated kiss.) Beautiful, Mark!
Thank you, Sharron. I love a happy ending, also. As always, I appreciate you reading and commenting. 🤓
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I liked it personally. I've even written my own a while back, but it needs to be revised. Anyway, great job, 8 lived the story!
Thank, Kim. I think the daily serial format gives readers something to look forward to. And I get to enjoy comments longer. 🤣🤓
Yes, and we ALL have time to read a page. Five pages at once is harder to commit to. I hate to say it, but the long stories end up on the back burner for a while.
I think that is the way of things for many people. With this format, you don't have to wait long for the next part. Or you can wait until the end and "binge-read" it.
A perfect balance - for ME, anyway.
Great. I would rather please regular readers than critics.
Yay!!!!!!
So good.
Thank you Mark.
Thank you, 3. I appreciate it. 🤓
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Thanks, Jack. 🤓