Great - now you've got me thinking about this in the wee hours of the night! : ) What about changing the title to "The Jellyfish Crew Plans" or "The Jellyfish Crew Makes a Plan"? These seem a little long for a short chapter. Given that the readers will understand by context that it's the crew of the Jellyfish that is meeting, you might say "The Crew Makes A Plan", or just "The Crew Plans". My two cents. Now I've got to catch up on the full story. Bye!
I like the "The Jellyfish Crew Plans." And I like the idea of shortening it even further. Maybe "The Plan." Or "A Plan." A short title for a short chapter. 🤓 Which do you like better?
Great - now you've got me thinking about this in the wee hours of the night! : ) What about changing the title to "The Jellyfish Crew Plans" or "The Jellyfish Crew Makes a Plan"? These seem a little long for a short chapter. Given that the readers will understand by context that it's the crew of the Jellyfish that is meeting, you might say "The Crew Makes A Plan", or just "The Crew Plans". My two cents. Now I've got to catch up on the full story. Bye!
I like the "The Jellyfish Crew Plans." And I like the idea of shortening it even further. Maybe "The Plan." Or "A Plan." A short title for a short chapter. 🤓 Which do you like better?
Thanks, Tim!
I like "The Plan" more - it seems more specific (definite article?). : )
Agreed. More determined, perhaps?
Yeah - like pirates sworn to rescue their Captain!