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Jul 10, 2021Liked by Mark Starlin

Well, THAT escalated quickly! 😳

I feel like there should have been some more direct foreshadowing that Elise does not like being disrespected as a business person. Maybe being a bit huffier with the Duke, then apologizing?

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Two young overly-reactionary minds at work. I have experience it first hand on many, many occasions in the early years of my marriage. 🤣

These are two characters with strong wills and emotions. There will be quick, intense clashes. We really know very little about Elise at this point. And Britpop is learning the hard way.

In the next chapter Elise realizes she over-reacted (as did Britpop. As usual.)

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