Some People Are Like Trees - People should act like people and less like trees, but here’s a counterpoint; trees don’t have to go to work. They can just relax in the sun all day!
Mattresses - You’d be rich with all that mattress money, but then the law would be after you!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 6 - The time storm came back because it realized that the timeline was going to get very VERY messed up!
I enjoyed the tree poem and the bit about mattresses, but I loved your serial. I thought it was the perfect length per post, and the way you gave a quick “refresher” brought me right back in to the story each time. Great job! I look forward to reading more of them! 😀
I loved following along with this serial! Not the ending I expected, but it was a fun ride! I would definitely read more serials from you in the future.
Trees: Some people are like shoe trees — getting shoved into the middle of things, then doing their best to help out.
Mattresses: “Honey, why is my side of the bed so hollow?” “Remember how you said you really, really wanted that expensive new car? Well...”
SOADI: Hmmm. The end is a tad deus ex machina for my taste, but when you’ve written yourself into a corner, sometimes a rope from the rafters is your only out. Still, wouldn’t be the first serial where it was fun up until the end! Good job, Mark!
Some People Are Like Trees - People should act like people and less like trees, but here’s a counterpoint; trees don’t have to go to work. They can just relax in the sun all day!
Mattresses - You’d be rich with all that mattress money, but then the law would be after you!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 6 - The time storm came back because it realized that the timeline was going to get very VERY messed up!
I enjoyed the tree poem and the bit about mattresses, but I loved your serial. I thought it was the perfect length per post, and the way you gave a quick “refresher” brought me right back in to the story each time. Great job! I look forward to reading more of them! 😀
That was a good ending to "Stranded On A Deserted Island". I really enjoyed the whole story and look forward to reading more serials if you do them.
The tree poem was wonderful, Mark!
Where do I sign for a mattress like that?
I loved following along with this serial! Not the ending I expected, but it was a fun ride! I would definitely read more serials from you in the future.
Trees: Some people are like shoe trees — getting shoved into the middle of things, then doing their best to help out.
Mattresses: “Honey, why is my side of the bed so hollow?” “Remember how you said you really, really wanted that expensive new car? Well...”
SOADI: Hmmm. The end is a tad deus ex machina for my taste, but when you’ve written yourself into a corner, sometimes a rope from the rafters is your only out. Still, wouldn’t be the first serial where it was fun up until the end! Good job, Mark!
Cool! You made it back. I had no idea how you could do that -- and If you write like I do, YOU didn't know either. ha ha ha! Nice work.
I did enjoy the serial. I kept waiting for the next episode. I like how it ended, keep us wondering what the world will be like.
I also liked the tree poem, I am not normally a poetry person, but that one resonated with me.