Some People Are Like Trees - People should act like people and less like trees, but here’s a counterpoint; trees don’t have to go to work. They can just relax in the sun all day!
Mattresses - You’d be rich with all that mattress money, but then the law would be after you!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 6 - The time storm came back because it realized that the timeline was going to get very VERY messed up!
I enjoyed the tree poem and the bit about mattresses, but I loved your serial. I thought it was the perfect length per post, and the way you gave a quick “refresher” brought me right back in to the story each time. Great job! I look forward to reading more of them! 😀
Thanks, Justin. The serial parts are the length I naturally write at one sitting, so they works well for me. And I think the refreshers are helpful to jog the memory after a week. I will be posting more serials down the road.
I loved following along with this serial! Not the ending I expected, but it was a fun ride! I would definitely read more serials from you in the future.
Trees: Some people are like shoe trees — getting shoved into the middle of things, then doing their best to help out.
Mattresses: “Honey, why is my side of the bed so hollow?” “Remember how you said you really, really wanted that expensive new car? Well...”
SOADI: Hmmm. The end is a tad deus ex machina for my taste, but when you’ve written yourself into a corner, sometimes a rope from the rafters is your only out. Still, wouldn’t be the first serial where it was fun up until the end! Good job, Mark!
Yeah, it is hard to end time-travel stories well. It's the nature of the beast. It could have gone on and on getting more and more complicated, so I thought it was time to bail out. At least I didn't drag it out for multiple seasons, like the TV show Lost, and then have a hugely disappointing ending.
Thinking back, almost every time travel story/show/movie I have read/seen has had a disappointing ending. If they ended at all. 🤣
Man! I sure do understand that! At the moment, I have worked myself into a corner on my latest three-part story, and find I have to backtrack and rewrite a couple of sentences that are already published, in order to move forward. Rats! I wish these characters would just tell me the whole story before I begin.
That is the danger of winging it. So far I have been able to work things out. I did write a 12,000 word story that way and got stuck at one point, but I eventually wiggled my way out. 🤣
Some People Are Like Trees - People should act like people and less like trees, but here’s a counterpoint; trees don’t have to go to work. They can just relax in the sun all day!
Mattresses - You’d be rich with all that mattress money, but then the law would be after you!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 6 - The time storm came back because it realized that the timeline was going to get very VERY messed up!
Trees have it easy, for sure.
The mattress money dilemma. An unusual problem.
It was TIME for the Time Storm to blow in and set things right. 😉
I enjoyed the tree poem and the bit about mattresses, but I loved your serial. I thought it was the perfect length per post, and the way you gave a quick “refresher” brought me right back in to the story each time. Great job! I look forward to reading more of them! 😀
Thanks, Justin. The serial parts are the length I naturally write at one sitting, so they works well for me. And I think the refreshers are helpful to jog the memory after a week. I will be posting more serials down the road.
That was a good ending to "Stranded On A Deserted Island". I really enjoyed the whole story and look forward to reading more serials if you do them.
Thank you, Pennie. There will be more serials down the road. 🤓
The tree poem was wonderful, Mark!
Where do I sign for a mattress like that?
I loved following along with this serial! Not the ending I expected, but it was a fun ride! I would definitely read more serials from you in the future.
Thanks, Claire. If I only knew where they sold those mattresses! I am glad the adventure made up for the ending. 🤓🤣
Trees: Some people are like shoe trees — getting shoved into the middle of things, then doing their best to help out.
Mattresses: “Honey, why is my side of the bed so hollow?” “Remember how you said you really, really wanted that expensive new car? Well...”
SOADI: Hmmm. The end is a tad deus ex machina for my taste, but when you’ve written yourself into a corner, sometimes a rope from the rafters is your only out. Still, wouldn’t be the first serial where it was fun up until the end! Good job, Mark!
Yeah, it is hard to end time-travel stories well. It's the nature of the beast. It could have gone on and on getting more and more complicated, so I thought it was time to bail out. At least I didn't drag it out for multiple seasons, like the TV show Lost, and then have a hugely disappointing ending.
Thinking back, almost every time travel story/show/movie I have read/seen has had a disappointing ending. If they ended at all. 🤣
Cool! You made it back. I had no idea how you could do that -- and If you write like I do, YOU didn't know either. ha ha ha! Nice work.
Thanks, Sharron. I just went along for the ride while writing the stranded story. 🤓
Man! I sure do understand that! At the moment, I have worked myself into a corner on my latest three-part story, and find I have to backtrack and rewrite a couple of sentences that are already published, in order to move forward. Rats! I wish these characters would just tell me the whole story before I begin.
That is the danger of winging it. So far I have been able to work things out. I did write a 12,000 word story that way and got stuck at one point, but I eventually wiggled my way out. 🤣
I did enjoy the serial. I kept waiting for the next episode. I like how it ended, keep us wondering what the world will be like.
I also liked the tree poem, I am not normally a poetry person, but that one resonated with me.
Thanks, Scott. I plan to do more serials in the future. I am glad you liked my “not normal” poetry. 🤣