"Maria grabbed Andelbert in an embrace." Something feels a bit awkward with this sentence. And "Maria embraced Andelbert" doesn't fully communicate the love and the fear well enough. Perhaps "Maria seized Andelbert in a quick embrace". Or, "Maria quickly embraced Andelbert". I don't know...what do you think?
"Maria grabbed Andelbert in an embrace." Something feels a bit awkward with this sentence. And "Maria embraced Andelbert" doesn't fully communicate the love and the fear well enough. Perhaps "Maria seized Andelbert in a quick embrace". Or, "Maria quickly embraced Andelbert". I don't know...what do you think?
Love this episode!!!