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Sharron Bassano's avatar

These two are good foils for each other! I like the interaction and dialogue.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

They have an interesting relationship. 🤣

Thanks, Sharron.

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Looking forward to tomorrow

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Kathleen. 🤓

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Sharpeye the proof reader. Good one, Mark. "Any free time is booze time." Spoken like the hardboiled reporter he is. You got me laiughin', Mark. I'll be back for more.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Great. Thanks, K.C. See you tomorrow.

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Jack Herlocker's avatar

Already I’m liking Charlotte!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

She's a doll. 😉🤣

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I felt major Humphrey Bogart vibes from this, Mark! Looking forward to installment number two.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Richard. I wanted that 40s and 50s noir, but I didn't want to do detective stories. So I made Max a newspaper reporter. This allows him to engage in some detective work/reporting and get into interesting situations. I also wanted it to be humorous.

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

It's running on all eight cylinders!

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