There's just something about your poetry that I love, the rhyme scheme in this one was exceptional. I wonder what will happen next on this strangely deserted island.
I did double-check the title to make sure you were not talking about a desserted island (cake, brownies, cookies... but the ice cream is all melted, and the sherbet is rather rank) because THAT would be classic Mark, but you're playing it straight, and rather well, too! I look forward to the next chapter.
Great stuff Mark. I am not typically a poem person, the but I really enjoyed Bee Sting. BTW I was wrong only once. But it turned out I was really right all along.
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Waiting...waiting...
Very good Mark, and I can't wait to read more of the Stranded On A Deserted Island story.
I love this Mark! I also write poetry love to make things rhyme as well. Sometimes they end up a song😁
There's just something about your poetry that I love, the rhyme scheme in this one was exceptional. I wonder what will happen next on this strangely deserted island.
looking forward to t he next chapter
Stubborn Arrogance - Nobody is perfect (but me).
I Got A Bee Sting In My Eye - This is un-bee-lievable!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 1 - Ooh, I wonder how this story will end.
I did double-check the title to make sure you were not talking about a desserted island (cake, brownies, cookies... but the ice cream is all melted, and the sherbet is rather rank) because THAT would be classic Mark, but you're playing it straight, and rather well, too! I look forward to the next chapter.
Fun stories and poem, Mark! I’m excited for next week’s installment. 😀
Love these!! My parents made all my siblings and I sing Come On Get Happy by The Partridge Family on our way to school anytime one of us was grumpy 🤣
Great stuff Mark. I am not typically a poem person, the but I really enjoyed Bee Sting. BTW I was wrong only once. But it turned out I was really right all along.
Your poem was cute and the story was unbelievable, yet I can’t wait for part two!