There's just something about your poetry that I love, the rhyme scheme in this one was exceptional. I wonder what will happen next on this strangely deserted island.
I did double-check the title to make sure you were not talking about a desserted island (cake, brownies, cookies... but the ice cream is all melted, and the sherbet is rather rank) because THAT would be classic Mark, but you're playing it straight, and rather well, too! I look forward to the next chapter.
Great stuff Mark. I am not typically a poem person, the but I really enjoyed Bee Sting. BTW I was wrong only once. But it turned out I was really right all along.
You found my albums. Enjoy!
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Waiting...waiting...
Only two more days. 🤓
Very good Mark, and I can't wait to read more of the Stranded On A Deserted Island story.
Thank you, Pennie. The next episode is a shocker. 😂
I love this Mark! I also write poetry love to make things rhyme as well. Sometimes they end up a song😁
Thanks, Terey. Songs are poetry. I am not sure if I would try to make Bee Sting into a song though. 🤣
Hey it may come out great as a country cause country is more bee sting genre lol
🤣 I am not sure of that. Maybe Bluegrass would be more fitting. Or Americana.
There's just something about your poetry that I love, the rhyme scheme in this one was exceptional. I wonder what will happen next on this strangely deserted island.
Thank you Claire. I appreciate it. I have always liked rhyming. Maybe it was all those Dr. Seuss books I read as a kid. 😂
Stay tuned!
looking forward to t he next chapter
Thanks, Mom. 🤓
Stubborn Arrogance - Nobody is perfect (but me).
I Got A Bee Sting In My Eye - This is un-bee-lievable!
Stranded On A Deserted Island • Part 1 - Ooh, I wonder how this story will end.
Love the pun. Thanks, V.
I did double-check the title to make sure you were not talking about a desserted island (cake, brownies, cookies... but the ice cream is all melted, and the sherbet is rather rank) because THAT would be classic Mark, but you're playing it straight, and rather well, too! I look forward to the next chapter.
I wouldn’t mind being stranded on Dessert Island. But I would probably gain 200 pounds before I got rescued. 🤣
Fun stories and poem, Mark! I’m excited for next week’s installment. 😀
Thanks, Justin. It’s gonna be a doozy!
Love these!! My parents made all my siblings and I sing Come On Get Happy by The Partridge Family on our way to school anytime one of us was grumpy 🤣
🤣🤣 I love that idea! I wish I had thought of that when my kids were at home. 🤓
Great stuff Mark. I am not typically a poem person, the but I really enjoyed Bee Sting. BTW I was wrong only once. But it turned out I was really right all along.
Thanks, Scott. I am glad you enjoyed my poem of questionable quality. And that you were correct after all. 😉🤓
Your poem was cute and the story was unbelievable, yet I can’t wait for part two!
Thanks, Kim. Hang on. The story gets even more unbelievable. 🤣