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David Perlmutter's avatar

So few words, so much said.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you, David. I am trying to get back in the practice of writing 50-Word stories regularly.

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just mud by Ron's avatar

There you go, keep on a walkin!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

I do love to walk. Thanks, mud. 🤓

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

She smiles. I smile. We all smile at this sweet story.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Aww. Thank you, Patricia. 🤓

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

Beautiful story!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you for your kind words, Pamela. 🤓

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

I'm so long-winded I don't know if I could ever write a 50 work story.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

It is a good exercise. It forces you to get down to the essentials of the story.

It is challenging but I enjoy it.

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

I'll have to give it a try at some point. I know it's been a thing for a while now and I keep meaning to try it! I think I need to make a list of new creative things to try and practice.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Do it. I didn't know I could do it until I tried. 🤓

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

I will do it! :)

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Elizabeth Marro's avatar

You nailed it. Thanks for a gem of a story.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you, Elizabeth. That makes me smile. 🤓

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Jack Herlocker's avatar

Excellent short, Mark! 💚 Just a couple iambic pentameters short of poetry. 😁

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Jack. Obviously, I had to look up “iambic pentameters.” Where do you get this stuff? Writers are weird. 😂

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James Ron's avatar

You are a fortunate man, Mark! May you both share many more years.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Indeed, I am. Thank you, James. 🤓

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Scott Ocamb's avatar

Great story.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you, Scott. I appreciate it. 🤓

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Connie Starlin's avatar

loved this, that's one of my favorite pictures, you two are amazing, and it's a great (true) story

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Mom. 🤓

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Justin Deming's avatar

A beautiful story, Mark!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Gracias mi amigo. 🤓

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Ben Woestenburg's avatar

Do you know how close you came to the truth?

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Very. 🤓

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Bill Adler's avatar

That's a beautiful short story. I love it.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you kindly, Bill. 🤓

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Justus's avatar

Good to know that I’m not the only one who gets shut down at the slightest hint of flattery. Cheers!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

We are not alone. 😂

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Nice, Mark. Congrats on keeping it together all these years!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Jim. The credit goes mostly to my wife, who is an amazing woman and somehow put up with me all these years. That’s real love. 🤣

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Jim Cummings's avatar

I'm sure she is but as they say, "It takes two."

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Mark Starlin's avatar

True.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Delightful!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Sharron. 🤓

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