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Meg Oolders's avatar

Stellar post, Mark. I really liked the sci-fi piece. 💜🤖

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thank you, Meg. I appreciate it. My writing is so all over the place, I am amazed anyone "gets it." I am glad a few people do. 🤓

K.C. Knouse's avatar

I love your stories behind the stock photos. They are always enjoyable if not an outright hoot! My Captain captured my attention. Great ending. It's a winner.

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, K.C. My Captain was a little darker than I usually write, but I go with what the story wants to be.

Sharron Bassano's avatar

Here I am sitting in my rocker, drinking coffee and reading Spanner's story. And even though they weren't even humans, I was hoping for a happy, romantic ending... I am still seventeen at heart...

And, what if you had a starfish as a pet?

Mark Starlin's avatar

I typically write happy endings, but sometimes they come out this way. Perhaps if the robot had left out the sad memories. Who knows?

If I had a starfish for a pet, I would probably say: I’m glad you fell down from the sky.

just mud by Ron's avatar

That was a super(nova) story, Mark!

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Ron. I am glad you didn’t space out reading it. 😉

Sunil Anand's avatar

A Paris love story! Beautiful and hilarious 😂

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Sunil. Love is different for everyone. 🤣

3musesmerge's avatar

Have you read Tuck Everlasting Mark?

My Captain put me in mind of the story.

Thank you.

Mark Starlin's avatar

I have not read Tuck Everlasting. I just read the synopsis on Wikipedia.

I suppose, like most things, living for centuries would be a two edged sword.

3musesmerge's avatar

The first line of the book just might be my favorite written line of all time:

The first week of August hangs at the very top of summer, the top of the live-long year, like the highest seat of a Ferris wheel when it pauses in its turning.

Mark Starlin's avatar

Nice. Slightly poetic, yet suitable for a children's book.

3musesmerge's avatar

Hmmm… Something to aim for.

Mark Starlin's avatar

Indeed. It's always good to be inspired to do better.

Brian Reindel's avatar

Great sci-fi story, Mark! I'm not sure I'd want to live centuries either. There's something about temporality that gives us purpose. Although, I'm not sure I'd want to burn up in a star either.

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Brian. It would be hard to find out that your memories were implanted in an android and that you are going to relive your sad memories and loneliness for centuries. But I probably don’t have to worry about it. 🤣

Jack Herlocker's avatar

“My Captain” — a sad but understandable story!

Mark Starlin's avatar

Thanks, Jack. It is a little darker than my usual stories. But sometimes they turn out that way.