Hi Mark, early on the Queen says "Rise, my guest" - I'm imagining that it should be "Rise, my guests". Later when talking with Elise, the Queen says "Britpop may have to means and connection..." Perhaps "Britpop may have the means and connections..." would flow better. I continue to enjoy your creations! : )
Hi Mark, early on the Queen says "Rise, my guest" - I'm imagining that it should be "Rise, my guests". Later when talking with Elise, the Queen says "Britpop may have to means and connection..." Perhaps "Britpop may have the means and connections..." would flow better. I continue to enjoy your creations! : )
Thanks again, Tim. Four eyes are better than two. 🙂