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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Well, the priest left no doubt about the veracity of Habar's story. I liked the way the solution was, in part, the General's plan. Destroy the portal! What a surprise for the General when Habar tapped him on the shoulder. And the church got their silver back, I guess. Nicely done, Mark. Teaching those from other planets how to ride a horse on Earth--cool!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Holy Cow! What an ending! And a beautiful first sentence, too. Now... was that ending a surprise to YOU, too? Or had you planned it all along?

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