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Jack Herlocker's avatar

(Sorry, Mark, getting caught up.) I like the alternating chapter threads idea. It’s a common enough story-telling device that readers won’t get confused.

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Cyn Taylor's avatar

For we all meet our Maker eventually. I don't believe you need the word "For" -a smile lit up her face. You don't need the word "up" - One thing I am noticing, are you intentionally using so many names that start with "M" for a reason? Just curious.

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