Elise Boissonneau • Chapter 34
The plot thickens...
Hi Mark. When Captain Peanut Butter is making his defence he says "...in the lands it was stolen from". You might want to consider changing it to "...in the lands from which it was stolen". Good stuff! - Tim
Taken To The King
The plot thickens...
Hi Mark. When Captain Peanut Butter is making his defence he says "...in the lands it was stolen from". You might want to consider changing it to "...in the lands from which it was stolen". Good stuff! - Tim